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Tsukishima Kyo - Hatsukoi  [ Vector ] by Yacookie Tsukishima Kyo - Hatsukoi  [ Vector ] by Yacookie
I had this picture on my computer for years and I wanted to vector it since the moment I saw it since
the original resolution and quality that is comes in is not satisfactory for my taste. With the concerntrated
will for many pictures like this to look better and end up as Wallpaper on computers, cell phones and other
media I started my journey as a vector artist about a month ago. Although the hours I spend working on
these vectors get surprisingly longer I learn something new every day and my work gets better and better.
Hope you enjoy^^

I would really appreciate any kind of feedback and comments. Thanks in advance = ]
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Time: 7 Hours
Program: Adobe Illustrator
Original Screenshot:  1 166 by Yacookie 
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:iconradicaldanny:
RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015
Yum yum ^^
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:iconjunkmunch:
junkmunch Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Pls. version with letters

That aside, looks great.
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:icondonttouchmyfoodbitch:
DontTouchMyFoodBitch Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Bewbs
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bewbs indeed my friend ^^
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:iconackermanlevi:
AckermanLevi Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
Sexy
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe, thanks :P
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:iconsaaricorporation:
SaariCorporation Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
:)
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:iconedate-yaramashi-oc:
Edate-Yaramashi-OC Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She's really cute! Good job!
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you sir = ]
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:iconjan-n-diam:
Jan-N-Diam Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
nice work;-)
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much = ]
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:iconjohnprestongc:
johnprestongc Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You lack line consistency all over.  You need to have both your nodes and handles parallel, and eliminate extra nodes, in order to avoid kinks, like on the breasts, the collar bone, the hair, etc.  Don't follow the original lineart 100% either.  You are making a vector at a high resolution.  Fix the inconsistencies and make each section of the drawing uniform with a specific thickness, such as hair thin, clothes thick, skin in the middle, etc.  Otherwise, it looks like a big mess of jumbled consistencies like it does now.

As for the coloring, you really dumbed it down a lot from the original.  There are a lot of subtle gradients in the hair and skin that are completely removed from the original.  Turning it all into hard shadows and flat colors doesn't really make it look nicer, in my opinion.  It really just looks like you weren't sure how to do it with blurs/gradients and decided to just do it with flat colors.

You need to take your time with vectors like this.  One of that quality should not be completed in 7 hours, especially with the experience you have.  Take it slowly and do not rush.  Something like this should take closer to 20 hours with proper lineart and coloring.
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated.
I know I need to work on my line consistency, I do recognise this as a problem myself but I did come across a bunch of helpful people and some nice tutorials since then and my next work is going to be, well like starting from scratch since I basically need to re-learn the pen tool properly.

As for colors I know that my first works aren't that great. All but one of them are done with the Live Paint Bucket tool which, as time went by, I came to realise how many flaws it has. If you want to see my progress from this to more or less what I know today you can check out my very latest deviation.

Thanks again for taking the time = ]
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:iconisidoran:
IsidoraN Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
cool
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you = ]
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:iconredwolf246:
RedWolf246 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
rw:she kinda reminds me of my oc girlfriend reileya
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe, ye she looks alot alike = ]
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:iconredwolf246:
RedWolf246 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
rw:want me to show u an example?
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I checked it out. on your deviations ;)
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:iconredwolf246:
RedWolf246 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
rw:that figures
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:iconshadowninjamaster:
ShadowNinjaMaster Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! This is an excellent picture you got here. The girl in this picture is beautiful too. If you have the line art of this girl with you. Can you send me a link? :)
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:iconyacookie:
Yacookie Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am not home at the moment but I will try to do that when I get back = ]
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:iconshadowninjamaster:
ShadowNinjaMaster Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alrighty, Thank you. :)
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